Read previewWhen Jeffrey Wang was a high-school senior in Connecticut in 2014, he wasn't sure what to write about for his college application essay.
AdvertisementHe wanted to show his personalityHe read Harry Bauld's book, 'On Writing the College Application Essay,' which made him realize college admissions officers wouldn't have time to read each essay diligently.
Authenticity is keyThe essay summarizes how Wang discovered his local McDonald's was an ideal place to study and meditate.
AdvertisementHe got into Yale, Harvard, and PrincetonGrowing up, Wang dreamed of attending Yale in his home state of Connecticut.
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Service, Business, Yale, Harvard, Princeton, Duke, MIT
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Connecticut, Cheshire , CT, McDonald's, San Francisco, ehopkins